Slow rush
demanding, scaling fingertips
echoing my wanting lips.
Wrenching, pounding heart skips
beats that want no more than this.
Your arms are cradling wisps
tangling, cloudy mists.
Your smile is the sun ecllipsed;
your fading glow surrounds me.
6 comments:
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You are one of the first aspiring poets I can relate to. Your imagery and your poetic diction are intriguing.
You show a great deal of promise.
beautiful. you are very talented, lovely.
xoxo
I'm so happy to be reading your heart-gripping poetry again. <3
Pure, unadulterated beauty.
You have a way with words, like you wave a wand making such beautiful pieces. I really adore your writing. There is so much that I relate to in what you have written on here and a lot of what I've read of yours just blows me away. You are a really talented writer. :)
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